THE PALACEWe stand up in the Palace, like it's the last of the great pioneer town bars
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Original: 4/10/2003 8:35 PM
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Thursday, April 10, 2003

 

alright, update time, here's a few more poems, some new, some old.  but they're all new to you.

Chino #1

you look past me,
though we're standing face to face.
and my words are blocked
escorted away through space.
can you feel my hands,
placed gently on your waist?
you're dissapointed and missunderstood,
taken for granted and so out of place.
i see your beauty
beneath your baseball cap,
but you don't notice.
don't look past me,
when we're standing face to face.
and hear my words
and let my love replace
all your pain.

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greetings. just happened to notice you have some pretty good poetry.
that is all.
Posted 4/11/2003 5:36 PM by frau_mozart - reply

Lovely, as always. I like how so many of your poems are personal, yet relatable to a lot of people. It makes the messages click. <:)

Ps. Corgan's work with Zwan is superb.

Posted 4/16/2003 7:47 AM by anonymous - reply

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wow. haevn't been here in a while (looks like u haven't either) but yea, i love this poem. and i whole-heartedly agree with the above comment....
Posted 6/11/2003 11:34 AM by starstainednight - reply

roses are red, violets are... wait a second, violets aren't blue, they're violet!
Posted 6/29/2003 11:31 PM by anonymous - reply


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